Lost boy with fox
“2 minutes until the bus leaves' ' the teacher exclaimed, as all the kids stepped triumphantly onto the bus. They arrive hurry as this kid jumps in excitement as they walk into the freaky friendly forest. The class makes its way down the deadly looking hill and a storm comes within a blink of an eye. The class rushes back but they leave little johnny behind boom bang as the lighting hit in the nearby forest. And he feels the cold rain shiver down his spine as he cries in fear he yells help me!!!. out of the top of his lungs. But no reply, just dead slight.
It's been 25 mins in the cold dead rain as he squints his eyes in the distance he sees shelter a tree he gasps. As he runs towards the tree with fear as he's running he trips and tumbles down a hill bang “ouch” As he gets up he hears something in the bush nearby. He breathes heavily and starts running like a cheater. He stops and takes a look back at its fox as he looks into its eye with fear.
The fox slowly approaches johnny. Jhony takes a step back crack as he steps on a stick the fox runs away and for some reason jhony follows it. For some reason jhony trust the fox after 5 minutes.
The friendly fox puts his nose to the ground and starts sniffing the ground like a k9 police dog as jhony slowly follows the fox like a turtle then he realises that the fox is helping him. 5 more minutes of fowling the fox he hears someone yell out in the distant johnny. As it echos through the forest he hears it again but this time it was closer. The fox starts to run towards the calling name so Johnny starts to run with it.
The noise gets closer and closer every second
At last light Appears in the sky and he can see his dad in the distance. He runs to him like flash when he got home in his cosy bed he was thinking about the fox how it lead him to his dad and home.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kade, What a great blog post I like how you did a great piece of descriptive writing and I like how you paragraphs to split the writing.
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it was so cool
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